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I seem to feel very uninspired when I sit down with pencil and paper to work on this so I tried some sketching on the computer. Some feedback maybe? I've been bugging Tania all day with it. :3
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in the first page there is a shot that shows the main character running. I believe a more dramatic shot could have been used instead. Since you are working from aspect to aspect you might want to consider a more angled shot showing the boat in the distance as she runs towards it. Other than that, I think that all the other shots work really good and that the story is clear. Great work
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